I like how much details you put on your art. The colour palette is also nice, but i wold recomand you think of new way of coloring hair - te rest of shading is pretty nice, but the hair doesn't really resemble hair structure,
This is a great piece. Your colouring and painting techniques are very soft yet defined. Overall, I think you balance the colours present here very well, and your lighting is spot on. Great attention to anatomy...nothing is jarring about the posing or proportions. This is a great drawing.